Oh gods where to begin?
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The money box came rolling out and clattered onto the floor.
PS. So I continued writing in the evening and got to 2,577 before deciding that I would spend enough time behind this keyboard tomorrow already and calling it a day, typing-wise. So my new last sentence for the day is:
He lost, or won, and handed me something that was surprisingly soft and sticky for something so clear.
Ninja Thing/ks 